Audience Research: Feedback On Pitch

For my audience research, I asked 5 questions based off of my pitch and moodboard combined - this then helped me consolidate my original ideas for my documentary and make any necessary improvements. 
(overall analysis of this feedback is at the bottom) 
Question 1: Do you think this fits the brief? 

 


Question 2: Do you think it is a good topic? Would it appeal to the target demographic? 


Question 3: Is there clear and effective audience engagement? 



Question 4: Is there clear use of digital convergence? 


Question 5: Any extra helpful/constructive comments or tips? Is there anything I missed?


What I learnt from this feedback: 

I need to focus more on the socially conscious aspect of the documentary, so I will focus on the lesser known areas of the makeup industry that no one talks about - include 'hidden secrets of the makeup industry' - such as the harmful chemicals that can be included in some popular products and how using different products may improve the environment etc, make it more educational and informative and have a more focused and specific theme about that topic.